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Wow, your game gorgeous! I like the music as well - it's relaxing but at the same time makes me feel like I'm going on an adventure. I also really like the suggestions you wrote on your project page for queering the game and the section about self-care.

I love the the final screen as well. I wasn't expecting a game with mermaids, but it was a pleasant surprise :D

Sounds like a cool game. I can definitely relate to being in the metro station, feeling lost, and feeling that it's an hostile environment. I'm glad to see that there will be a happy ending.

I'm curious to see what the final product will look like. A game about zine culture is super cool!

I love how you used collage and explored the relationship between text and images. I was also glad to see ACT UP being mentioned. We really don't talk enough about ACT UP and AIDS in general in queer games.

I love your game! It's well written and really immersive. I found it super funny at the beginning with the form (I won't spoil lol) and I also like how you incorporated the texting mechanic. I don't know if that could be interesting, but your game reminded me a little of Jordan Youngblood's paper on homonationalism and militarism in the Mass Effect series.

Thank you for this game! Like Sasha said, it was semi-autobiographical but I could relate to your experience on many levels. I liked the stats you chose to incorporate in your game and how we progressively discover them :)

Very cool!! I love the idea of converting the enemy. I had a lot of fun playing your game and I managed to convert 52 people. I wasn't expecting that hahaha XD

I loved the writing style and I loved choosing my pen at the beginning of the game :) Like someone else wrote, the ability to cycle through different translations was a good idea. I don't know many games were we play as a translator.

I'm a plant lover, so I really liked the section with all the plants and the big windows. It made feel "outside." I've also played Gone Home recently, so maybe that's why, but I felt that there was a Gone Home feel to your game, but with a story that was less tragic.

Thanks for this game! I really liked the pastel colours and the mix of green and red - it was really soothing.

A very nice game! I loved being able to write in different sections of your game. It gave me the impression of interacting and creating with you.